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FADE TO BLACK: the screenwriting mini-course ends.

4/15/2014

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Two weeks ago, my first teaching experience for screenwriting came to a close. Five students finished the course, and each participant had the beginnings of a good film script. Four students may just do something with their work. One never gave her work a chance, regardless of my or the other students' help.

A director told me the number one "skill" needed in actors is: the ability to take directions.

How pliable are you? Must you do everything the director says? No. Directors are human, too. Fallible creatures. But if an actor's response to every note is simply: "No," "I don't want to do that," "That's not what I want,"
"Yes, but...," then the director will tire of working with that artist.


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Loglines: the portable litmus test for your script

3/15/2014

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I love student participation in class, especially when it comes to creating and refining something. This week we examined loglines, one from each student for his or her script.

Bruce Snyder's book Save the Cat offers a simple construction pattern to follow when building a logline. I was taught to work off my script's theme, a good practice. But the logline is more concrete, tangible. Similar to a thesis statement in an exposition paper. It's a single sentence - two, if necessary, but in the words of Walter White/Heisenberg, "Tread lightly"- that contains: the Who and what the who Wants, with implied conflict. Remember: only one sentence, this makes the logline easy to memorize and makes you and, thus, want to take it with you. Like a fine piece of luggage.

Our class had loglines that traveled from talking extraterrestrial cats, to corrupt cops, to long-distance lovers, to immigrant gravediggers, to Russian Jewish folklore.

In the end, they were all toting some respectable loglines.

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"Is Leather That Comfortable?" - and other important screenwriting topics

2/12/2014

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During our third week, of the eight week screenwriting mini course at Concord University, we examined Act One in the three act paradigm, by watching the first act of the film The Matrix (1999).
The students had already submitted their choices for the major beats in the movie (e.g. Opening Image, Inciting Incident, Plot Point 1, etc.), and with their work done, it was my turn to walk them through each key moment, explaining where and when the major beats occurred.

We finished the task.
I asked for questions.
The first one was a stunner: "Is leather that much more comfortable than other material?"
I didn't know what to say.
Another student chimed in: "No, leather is hot and noisy."
One students confessed to having owned a pair of leather pants.
The rest of the class added their comments as to the practicality of leather in everyday life. It was a fun turn of events. I was expecting some further investigation into how character arc is stronger when it's connected to the key story beats. We got to that, eventually, but not before we took a detour on the leather road less traveled.


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Word Budget: the economy of screenwriting

2/12/2014

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You don't have a ton of time to tell a movie. How do you give the best information in the least amount of time? Images and Actions.

Films exist in a world that hinges on the visual. Dialogue is important, and we all have our favorite movie quotes: "Unite us. Unite the clans," is one of mine. But films are meant to be visual: When William Wallace, his back to the camera, turns to face his cheering band of Scotsmen because he successfully led an attack against the English that killed his wife, I had an epiphany. It became the chief cornerstone for me wanting to enter the arts. In that moment, I knew I wanted to be involved, in someway, with making movies.

The master filmmakers know how to visually tell their stories. They know how to reveal character and plot and theme primarily through image/action and secondly through dialogue. And the master screenwriters do just the same. One of my favorite screenwriters is Wes Anderson. Yes, he also directs his work, and that makes him better than the rest of us, but so what. His voice is unique. His stories are profound, honest art.


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Teaching a Screenwriting class

2/1/2014

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For the first time in the school's history, Concord University (Athens, WV) is offering a class on Screenwriting.

And I, Mark Botts, am teaching it.

The Dean of Concord's English Department is a film aficionado - it's ridiculous the number of movies that man has seen. He chairs the Film Society, too, and is very proud of the institution's film library, a project he has steadfastly led for many years.

When he and I first met, in the fall 2013, we discussed my teaching (as an adjunct) a World Literature class. I was thrilled for that opportunity.

Our second meeting focused on movies - films - cinema.


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Here Comes the Sun

2/1/2013

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While researching future technology for our latest sci-fi script, Immunity,  Mark and I came across the concept of solar roadways. Check out this video. I then had the opportunity of meeting the inventors, Scott and Julie Brusaw, at a conference in town. One thing led to another and Mark and I ended up writing a feature article for a parking and transportation journal called The Parking Professional.  We enjoyed getting to know the Brusaws and writing the article. Hope you enjoy reading it. Excerpt below and full article available by clicking the link below. Responses are welcomed. 

"The American road system is breaking. As materials age and wear – due to weather, time, and traffic – the infrastructure suffers breakdowns that threaten lives, budgets, and environmental conditions. Traditionally, a “patch and repair” method has been applied to the problem, but this solution lacks the ability to keep pace with the decay. Add to this equation: cost. In December 2007, a ton of liquid asphalt – the primary product used in roads – cost roughly $175.00; today, that cost has escalated to $1,000 per ton. From 1998 to 2003, highway spending from the government amounted to approximately $80 billion per year and has risen significantly since then. Thus it seems in the near future, the costs will be too much to continue using this antiquated process of laying and repairing roads."
Read the entire article here: Here Comes the Sun

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52 Week Challenge - Read/Watch/Write

1/1/2013

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Mark and I had the brilliant idea to take on the 52 Week Challenge from www.readwatchwrite.com.

This wonderful website has posted 52 scripts from all different genres with a challenge to read one a week for a year. What's the point you may ask? One of our heroes, Robert McKee, in his great book Story, argues that if you want to be a successful screenwriter then you should be writing, reading scripts or watching movies every day. Along the lines of Gladwell's "10,000-Hour Rule", we will be reading some of the greatest scripts of all time in an attempt to learn from the masters. From Chinatown to Zombieland, we'll be studying. We'll let you know our favorites at the end of the year.

 Interested yourself? Take up the challenge here:  http://readwatchwrite.com/master-list/.

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With Writing: Who Are You?

11/23/2012

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My first post concerning writing initiated the conversation with writing: YOU.

If you missed the post, it's still hanging around on the left hand side of this screen, and it's called, 
 "With Writing: The Start." Check it out - now; right now. It's so good.

Once you've refreshed yourself, let's ask and answer the question - "Who Are You?"


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With Writing: The Start

9/17/2012

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With writing, where do you begin? - Conflict. Character. Plot. Theme. Inciting Incident. Obligatory Scene. Climax. Denouement. Resolution. 

Sure. If you want.

But, may I suggest that you begin with: YOURSELF.

Your life experiences differ from everyone else: your parents, your siblings, your friends, your lover, your hero, etc, etc; therefore, it makes sense to write from the point you know best, the point of: YOU.


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